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In other words, how will your presence enrich our community? Attending the University of Milwaukee has always been a huge dream of mine since i was a kid.
My life experiences, perspectives, talents, commitments and interests will enrich the community of The University of Wisconsin-Milwaukee. My life experiences have made me who I am today.
Throughout my years in high school, I have went through many different obstacles which made me a stronger person today. Balancing school work, family, and extra curricular activities was tough but I always managed to make my way through it.
My sophomore year I was inspired by my school social worker. She really helped me with the obstacles I was facing at the time and helped me to get through the problems I faced.
Ever since then I have wanted to help kids in my future by going to school to become a social worker. Because I am a strong and wise person due to my life experiences, I can enrich your campus by being focused and wise with my studies.
Dance is my talent that has got me through everything in my life. I have been dancing since I was four years old. This talent I want to take to college.
I want to tryout for the UWM Dance team.
This leads me to my commitments and interests. I work very hard to better myself and my team. My Junior year on the dance team, I received the position of Co-captain. That year, I learned from my captains how to become one of them the following year. This year, I am a captain and I am very proud of my role on the team.
This position requires responsibility, patience, and leadership. I work very hard as a captain to make sure my team is the best they can be while striving to better myself. As a captain, the other team mates look up to me as a dancer, person, and a role model. This is a huge responsibility.
How my team performs, reflects me and I am very proud of my team which makes me proud of myself. Being on the dance team, and being a captain, taught me patience, responsibility, and leadership. If I were to be accepted, I will tryout for the Dance team.
I can use the skills I learned from my high school dance team to better myself as a dancer on the UWM dance team. I am an extremely dedicated person and I will never give up.
I believe that my life experiences caused me to become a better, wise, and responsible person who is able to focus on goals for my future.
My talents and commitments have also made me very responsible, and a great leader. It is good that you mention your virtues but you are very repetive, like telling us that you are "patience, responsible and leadership" twice.
Fall Application Essays are Now Available. Here’s your chance to tell your story based on specific questions or prompts. UW System campuses will now share one common essay. Admission to our university is competitive and selective, and we review applications using a holistic process. Tell us why you would like to attend the University of Wisconsin–Madison. In addition, please include why you are interested in studying the major(s) you have selected. The maximum word count for each essay is , but we. Undergraduate Admission; Apply Now. Start a new application; Complete an existing application; Graduate. UWM welcomes the University of Wisconsin-Milwaukee at Waukesha and the University of Wisconsin-Milwaukee at Washington County to its Panther family. For information on how to apply to either of these two campuses, .
Also you should get yourself some synonyms since you sometimes even have 3 repeated words in a sentence. Finally I think that you should work on your sentence structure since it sounds like a list "I Try not to be vague.
Personally I believe that you should also change your hook with something like a mini-anecdote or some impacting statement because it is very typical. I hope my feedback works for you. Don't just list things like this. Tell the reader about 2 of your most important goals in that intro paragraph.
End that intro paragraph with a sentence that tells the main point of the whole essay.Admission to our university is competitive and selective, and we review applications using a holistic process.
Tell us why you would like to attend the University of Wisconsin–Madison. In addition, please include why you are interested in studying the major(s) you have selected.
The maximum word count for each essay is , but we. Comprehensive information on admission at University of Wisconsin - Milwaukee, including admission requirements and deadlines, early and regular admission rates, GPAs and test scores of recently admitted freshmen, and more. University of Wisconsin – Milwaukee, School of Education.
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You will find the shared essay on the Campus Specific (UW-NAME OF CAMPUS) section of the online application and the campuses that will require an additional essay will include it in the campus specific section as well.
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